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Hikari
Posts : 248 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 26
Character sheet Magic Type: Fire Dragon Slayer Rank: D Jewels: 3600
| Subject: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:12 pm | |
| I'm not done with he first chapter yet but I wanted to make sure I got everything right. So tell me if I got something wrong!~ - Mercutia:
Mercutia, with her dirty blonde hair in a ponytail and her precious trench coat on, walked down the streets of Shirostume Town. She was going to her guild, Foxhound, for a very important meeting, if one were to call going over things with Lionel a meeting. She had joined the Foxhound guild after a very interesting conversation between some mages, herself included. Lionel, the guild master for Foxhound, was looking for more members for his guild. As was this other boy, she couldn’t for the life of her remember his name. She had been intrigued with the fact that Foxhound had a rather large library, a plus for her because she loved to read and because it would help with her Archive magic. Another thing that made her want to choose Foxhound as her guild was that she thought the other boy was an ass.
Mercutia entered the front doors of her guild and headed to find Lionel so that they could have this so called ‘meeting’. She could only guess what he was actually going to talk about. Probably things like how to get stronger or how to get noticed. Something that wasn’t as important as other things were.
- Aiko:
Aiko, with his brown hair spiked up in every which way, was walking down the streets of Magnolia Town, reminiscing all the times he’s walked down those streets. He remembered when he met Hikari, a rather pretty girl who was trying to fight against two huge guys. He had stepped in and tried to help, but that had made her mad. When he stood to the side to let her fight, one of the guys stabbed her. That had been enough for him. Aiko had knocked both of the guys out and taken her to the hospital. After she had gotten checked out, he took her and her pet flying wolf to eat at his favorite ramen place. Ah, how he loved that memory. That was the beginning of it all. He joined the Fairy Tail guild sometime after that and now he’s going on mission after mission. He loves it.
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| | | Mercutia
Posts : 112 Join date : 2012-04-16
Character sheet Magic Type: Archive Rank: E Jewels: 500
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:18 pm | |
| All I have to say is don't use and too much, and show...don't tell. | |
| | | Hikari
Posts : 248 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 26
Character sheet Magic Type: Fire Dragon Slayer Rank: D Jewels: 3600
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:21 pm | |
| You don't use and too much and what? | |
| | | Mercutia
Posts : 112 Join date : 2012-04-16
Character sheet Magic Type: Archive Rank: E Jewels: 500
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:27 pm | |
| It gets repetitive if you say "she walked, and she ran. Then she laughed, and she talked, and she saw." Same goes if you "tell" the audience everything. Use vivid images, don't act as if you're telling a friend what happened, show them it. "He stumbled away, clutching the cloth to his mouth to keep from choking on the cloying gas." Is much more exciting than "He walked back covering his mouth because the gas was awful." | |
| | | Hikari
Posts : 248 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 26
Character sheet Magic Type: Fire Dragon Slayer Rank: D Jewels: 3600
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:37 pm | |
| Ah okay. Thanks!
Is that any better? | |
| | | Mercutia
Posts : 112 Join date : 2012-04-16
Character sheet Magic Type: Archive Rank: E Jewels: 500
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 03, 2012 6:30 pm | |
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| | | Hikari
Posts : 248 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 26
Character sheet Magic Type: Fire Dragon Slayer Rank: D Jewels: 3600
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 03, 2012 6:46 pm | |
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| | | Aiko Admin
Posts : 263 Join date : 2012-04-08 Age : 24
Character sheet Magic Type: Crash Rank: F Jewels: 5000
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:27 pm | |
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| | | Hikari
Posts : 248 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 26
Character sheet Magic Type: Fire Dragon Slayer Rank: D Jewels: 3600
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:43 pm | |
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| | | Hikari
Posts : 248 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 26
Character sheet Magic Type: Fire Dragon Slayer Rank: D Jewels: 3600
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sat Jun 09, 2012 1:02 am | |
| I added onto the parts from last time. I have a few questions before I continue. - Mercutia:
Mercutia, with her dirty blonde hair in a ponytail and her precious trench coat on, walked down the streets of Shirostume Town. She was going to her guild, Foxhound, for a very important meeting, if one were to call going over things with Lionel a meeting. She had joined the Foxhound guild after a very interesting conversation between some mages, herself included. Lionel, the guild master for Foxhound, was looking for more members for his guild. As was this other boy, she couldn’t for the life of her remember his name. She had been intrigued with the fact that Foxhound had a rather large library, a plus for her because she loved to read and because it would help with her Archive magic. Another thing that made her want to choose Foxhound as her guild was that she thought the other boy was an ass.
Mercutia entered the front doors of her guild and headed to find Lionel so that they could have this so called ‘meeting’. She could only guess what he was actually going to talk about. Probably things like how to get stronger or how to get noticed. Something that wasn’t as important as other things were. When Mercutia actually got Lionel, she saw something she wasn’t quite expecting. At all.
Lionel stood, with his hands tied behind his back, in between two large men. Beside Lionel stood little Aessa, whose hands were tied behind her back. Aessa had joined their guild sometime after Mercutia herself had. Aessa had a healer type magic, which would come in handy when they all fought together as a group and someone got hurt. Though she wasn’t too good fighting alone, because she didn’t have many, if not any, offensive spells. Mercutia looked between her guild members and the men, trying to piece together what on earth had happened.Did Lionel get into trouble with these guys? Sigh, he seriously needs to stop doing that… She thought, her mind instantly thinking Lionel had something to do with this, which he probably did. His personality was just that way.
“Look guys…” She started out, trying to coax the men to release Lionel and Aessa. They didn’t give her any time to talk though because right as she said those two words, they were on her in a matter of seconds. One tried grabbing her arms and tying them behind her back. She, of course, wasn’t going to allow that to happen. She kicked the guy behind her in the gut and jumped out of the way of the other guy. If it’s a fight they want, then it’s a fight they get. She reacted this way for two reasons. One, they jumped on her for no reason, that she knew of anyways. And two, one of them came dangerously close to her trench coat. Which was a big no no in her book.
On yours, why did the Vipers come and kidnap you guys? And is that how she would react? - Aiko:
Aiko, with his brown hair spiked up in every which way, was walking down the streets of Magnolia Town, reminiscing all the times he’s walked down those streets. He remembered when he met Hikari, a rather pretty girl who was trying to fight against two huge guys. He had stepped in and tried to help, but that had made her mad. When he stood to the side to let her fight, one of the guys stabbed her. That had been enough for him. Aiko had knocked both of the guys out and taken her to the hospital. After she had gotten checked out, he took her and her pet flying wolf to eat at his favorite ramen place. Ah, how he loved that memory. That was the beginning of it all. He joined the Fairy Tail guild sometime after that and now he’s going on mission after mission. He loves it.
Aiko walked into his guild, looking around to see if anyone else was there. They had one other member in their guild, a girl by the name of Hachi. She had joined Fairy Tail a little bit before Aiko had. This depressed him a little; he had wanted to be the second member of Fairy Tail, right after Hikari. But alas, his dream was short lived because someone else had taken it away from him. So now he was the third member of Fairy Tail. Aiko couldn’t see either Hikari or Hachi and began to wonder where they could be. Maybe Hikari is fighting, she seems to like to do that a lot. He thought, pondering where his guild members could be. He soon shrugged it off though, not being one to think too hard on such unimportant things. He took a seat at one of the bar stools at the bar, which had no alcoholic beverages in it whatsoever and shouldn’t even be called a bar, and grabbed himself some water. He sat in silence for a few moments until he took another sip of his water. Aiko soon became restless, never really liking having to sit and stay silent. He got up, leaving his water on the counter, and left the guild. He was going to go and find someone to talk to, or maybe even train with.
On yours, is that how he would react? - Hikari:
Hikari, with her blonde hair let down, sat on the grass under one of the many trees in the forest area near Magnolia Town. She called it a forest but others probably just thought of it as a place where trees over took the area. She didn’t care either way though, as long as she had her shade and her time alone with nature. It was one of her many joys in life, that and fighting. Hikari, though she may not look it, loved to fight. She especially loved to fight those who happened to be bigger and larger than herself. Most people probably didn’t take her seriously as a guild master because she was so short and petite. That was something she indeed loved to prove others wrong about. When her opponent went to attack her, she would clash their spell with her own. Sometimes hers would win, other times hers wasn’t strong enough and she would lose. But that at least showed she wasn’t some weak littler girl who couldn’t fight, much to some people’s dismay.
She closed her eyes, about to take an afternoon nap with a calm breeze blowing. Kuroi, her lupine exceed or as she called him, a ‘flying wolf’, laid beside her on the grass. It was soft and cozy, just like a blanket. A place where anyone could easily fall asleep in. Though Kuroi wouldn’t be sleeping, one of them had to stay awake in case someone decided to attack them. It wasn’t uncommon to hear about, some getting attacked while sleeping, but it hadn’t been heard of that a guild master got attacked while napping. That just wasn’t a good thing. Hikari slowly drifted into unconsciousness, her best friend and companion staying guard beside. All seemed well in the world at that moment. No threats or horrors to think about. Just the soft grass beneath her body, the breeze to cool her off and allure her into sleep, and a guardian to protect her.
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| | | Aiko Admin
Posts : 263 Join date : 2012-04-08 Age : 24
Character sheet Magic Type: Crash Rank: F Jewels: 5000
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:49 am | |
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| | | Ueda
Posts : 97 Join date : 2012-04-15 Age : 25 Location : Where deers are. Do the math. xD
Character sheet Magic Type: Illusion Magic Rank: F Jewels: 5000
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sat Jun 09, 2012 5:33 pm | |
| Sounds good XD That's pretty good :3 | |
| | | Hikari
Posts : 248 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 26
Character sheet Magic Type: Fire Dragon Slayer Rank: D Jewels: 3600
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 10, 2012 6:52 pm | |
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| | | Ueda
Posts : 97 Join date : 2012-04-15 Age : 25 Location : Where deers are. Do the math. xD
Character sheet Magic Type: Illusion Magic Rank: F Jewels: 5000
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:32 pm | |
| What other characters will be included? LEHINT XD | |
| | | Hikari
Posts : 248 Join date : 2012-04-09 Age : 26
Character sheet Magic Type: Fire Dragon Slayer Rank: D Jewels: 3600
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:41 pm | |
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| | | Ueda
Posts : 97 Join date : 2012-04-15 Age : 25 Location : Where deers are. Do the math. xD
Character sheet Magic Type: Illusion Magic Rank: F Jewels: 5000
| Subject: Re: Fan-fic so far Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:54 pm | |
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