Training For Fire Bear's Slash [Done]

The sun shined down on Magnolia Town, the kids played and the birds chirped. Dominique messed with his hair trying to get it to look nice. "Come on!" He sighed. "There!" He smiled and walked out his door. "I'll be back later mom! I'm gonna go train!" He yelled smiling. After a few minutes of walking he finally reached the dojo. He read the sign above it. Magnolia Town Dojo! Dom pushed himself through the door and looked around. He was amazed. This was the first time he had been to the dojo since the renovations they did a few years ago. Nobody seemed to be around so Dom made his way to the dummies. "Ok, lets do this thing."

Dominique stared at the dummy in front of him. His mind almosting drifitng off. He stopped himself before he started day dreaming.He put his hand to his forehead and rubbed his temples. God... Being in the dojo againbrought back memories from when he was younger. He pulled himself together and readied his fists. "Ok! Lets do this for real!" Dom closed his eyes and cleared his mind. He opened his eyes to a flash of light. When the flash of light was over Dom had obtained bear paws, bear ears, and a bear tail. "Hi-yah!" He shouted as his paws caught on fire and slashed the dummy in half. "Thats how you do it!" Dominique said smiling.

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I like your writing style, quite energetic.
Although a few typos, easily overlooked mind you.

Accepted~